Lighting for the 1st one nice.Think could be beta if the model moves forward slightly a bit to remove the shadow from his right face.
Kinda like the second picture . I have a different opinion from tunster, I think the seperation of the blue and the white from the line is good. But I think the white clothing on his right eye ,if removed, will yield a beta picture. Caption for 2nd picture spot on. :bsmilie: