zoossh
Senior Member
i am really not liking the distortion here. a little bit is fine, since you are after all using an ultra wide, but if you have the opportunity and time to change, why not switch to something which would render them less demon-like? :dunno:
i think this is a double edged thingy. on one side, the distortion is meant to create emphasis to their fists and hands as it is a fun picture. on the other hand, severe distortion in two planes can ruin a picture too, and i have some other pictures that i did not post, having that problem... which is the reason that i'm shifting more and more from 10mm to 20mm, and may consider a 30mm lens to learn a new composition. i reckon that concern
not quite sure about the depth of field here, i thought it was a tad too shallow for my liking. certainly the focus is locked on nicely, but the lack of sharpness in his other facial features spoils this somewhat for me.
that depth of field actually is to my liking... but it varies with the working distances, so only a certain series run in this fashion. i can understand your liking as it is not conventional, probably DOF made more "narrow" due to a tilt up shot, making the ears and mouth more anteriorly and out of focus. i probably have to look back at this style a year later and decide again whether it works, becos my perception does change with time and experience.
there is also prominent distortion due to going in too close - i.e. bloated faced syndrome. 50mm tends to be more suitable for head/shoulders or further. have you considered using liquify to correct?
yup, agreed. think i have to alter my focal length/working distance to get a better compression.
got to look up what is "liquify"... not very photoshop savvy
i like everything about this one, except for the bluish cast. have you considered converting to black and white - understand that removal might turn out to a pain in the arse.
i'm not so particular about that cast. in fact, once in a while a different cast would be refreshing, and the cast can represent a certain lighting condition and its natural environment. but i would consider removing a cast that is unnatural. as for converting to b/w, i think that is an open option too.
anyways, hope i don't turn out looking like i'm nitpicking.
nope, looking forward to comments from many others.
i really think you should forsake your personal preference for colored photos and consider black and white sometimes, especially when the colors are not in harmony, or there are problems with having color.
i tend to cast aside those with clashing colors rather than to attempt a b/w... but i gradually more open to some tries, not that often though.
i would prefer conversions in many of them (like the ghandhi statue one)..![]()
may try out later...
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