Thea, Katherine, Francesca and Lisa

[rihocbb]

3rd time going for an organised photoshoot. Had the opportunity to shoot 4 models. Will post 4-5 photos for each model. C & C pls and help me improve. Thanks!

THEA

#Thea1

#Thea2

#Thea3

#Thea4

 

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KATHERINE

#kat1

#kat2

#kat3

#kat4

 

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Francesca

#Fran1

#Fran2

#Fran3

#Fran4

#Fran5

 

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LISA

#Lisa1

#Lisa2

#Lisa3

Help me improve!

 

[Zeisser]

Both models Katherine and Francesca's legs seem bruised not a very pleasant
sight for model shoots.

 

[rihocbb]

hmmm yea didn't realise that. Will take note in the future. Thanks!

Anyone else bothers helping me improve?

 

[kei1309]

i'm sleepy so i'll be quick:

1) watch out for what's in the background.
2) shoot from different angles... you don't always need to have full-body shots

 

[sinned79]

act cute shots always fails to impress me.

 

[Levis]

It seem like you enjoy chopping off the models hands and legs which is not very nice, learn to frame your subject.

#Kat1 - Both legs kenna chop
#Fran2 - Three left fingers kenna chop off
#Fran5 - Left foot kenna chop into half