Pissed and tiring day..dig out something soothing for PP..
fwah! mirror image! LOL.
hope u dun mind if i give my 0.00002 cents. will delete them if u want
left img:
- burned highlight on leg, esp the one on the thigh, makes the thigh look bulging.
- highlights on leg also take attention from face, where there isn't really much light.
- i think pose + lighting could be improved if you shoot from just slightly more to the left n a slightly higher angle, with her face slightly raised as to maintain eye contact?
- nitpick: the right footwear cropped a tad too closed.
right img:
- shadow above left side of sofa too hard.
- nose shadow unflattering. try lighting from a slightly higher angle so that the shadow falls within the "arch" formed when a person smiles (read somewhere, dun really know how to explain. ask me about it next time we meet?)
- if the output of flash to the left is lowered, it shud cast less shadow on top of the sofa, and the sofa wont be so bright as to start stealing attention from the model?
just my 0.0000000000000000000002 cents :embrass: