Not that I'm a portrait expert, but as far as everything concerning conventional and formal portraits go ... I think you've broken just about every 'rule' there is. :bsmilie:
Without getting into a long debate about what constitutes a 'portrait' or some foggy arty farty 'artistic license' thingie, Google 'How to take good portraits' or the 'basics of portrait photography'.
Also look up 'how to pose a model'. Understanding angles and anatomy will help greatly.
Youtube also has some great videos with similar topic headers.
CHEERS!
Seriously, go and Google or youtube. LOTS of great articles, tips and hints there!
Not that say don't want to help you, but no point copying everything there and pasting here.
Also, looking at the videos can help greatly as there is direct visual reference.
Take it slow and stick with the BASICS first.
Hi all, recently went to botanic for a potrait shoot and heres the result,
Can anyone tell me in what way should i improve?
Is the pic ok? any parts should i improve?