Oh come on, you are a professional, I am merely an amateur!
But then, my question is why did you pose a shot form the "pre clicks of the shoot"? Doesn't CS deserve everyone's best efforts?
If you have a better version, why didn't you post that?
Don't bring up me as a professional, I didn't come to this forum as a professional status chap giving everybody a hard time... I'm maybe making my bucks in photography, but I do have a hobby called photography as well...
No real reason why I posted a image like that... It just goes to show some do not go into such technical details... Bad and good sometimes.... Some choose to like it just the way it is...
Anyway, I just wanted to see how much can retouching salvage an image... Having listen to your comment earlier, I've made a few adjustments like making somebody perpetually thinner, cleaning up hair-dos... This is one colour tone I like.. and something I salvage through a pile of test shots while preparing for shoot...
I think it's salvage worthy this one...
My thoughts on photography and pre thoughts before I did retouching....
1. I did like it surreal.. It's true you mentioned that the lighting was flat, real reason because I wanted it even flatter than what it was supposed during the moment of capture... I thought it was easy shooting flat coloured, but actually easier said than done...
2. The different patches of skin tone? Yup, the smoke made that happened and not really what you called 'uneven lightings, or bad lightings'...
3. I didn't see anything wrong with the poses DP... but that's fine... after all you're the critique... Will see how I can improve on that...
4. I again didn't see anything wrong with my stylist though... Ballet inspired still I'll call it, but I thought 'inspired' was 'inspired'... don't take it word for word... maybe my choice of words went against me... Sorry if that triggered you...
5. Pre-clicks I called it, before I really didn't finalise on camera yet, or even the smoke.. The earliest of shots being clicked just to see how images looks like... Ironically, I like it because the the pose that's seemingly what you detest about most...
6. CS deserves my best efforts, but here's a reality check on how unforgiving our eyes are, even myself... and how crucial we are to other's work but often found our works pleasing....
7. See if there's anything more I should correct from here DP, I really wanna know how much is fake, and how much is real?
The finished pic... just a learning curve everybody should know..
Cheers,
PBS