This critique thread will be a little different from the others, since I'll be having two photos up for critique in this thread, to serve as a comparison.
Comparison for critiques as follow:
Waiting. by Linerax, on Flickr
compared with
Longing. by Linerax, on Flickr
1. In what area is critique to be sought?
2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture.
You may now unleash your fury upon this little kid here. :sweat:
Comparison for critiques as follow:
Waiting. by Linerax, on Flickr
compared with
Longing. by Linerax, on Flickr
1. In what area is critique to be sought?
- Which achieves a better effect in terms of "solitude" I wish to portray?
- Is the cross-process effect done too strong, too "photoshopped?"
- How is the black and white?
- Composition wise, position of the person and the background. How can they be improved?
2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
- As mentioned above, a feeling of "solitude" and also "longing".
3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
- I don't think is necessary.. :think:
4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture.
- I personally prefer the black and white version of the photo, since it tends to bring out the theme "solitude" more, however I've received comments such as weird hair and also weird facial shape from different individuals who preferred the cross-processed version.
You may now unleash your fury upon this little kid here. :sweat: