MarkTan89 Senior Member Jun 30, 2007 591 0 16 Boon Keng May 16, 2008 #1 After all this while, we still couldn't make up our minds on where we were together so let's just walk our separate ways....
After all this while, we still couldn't make up our minds on where we were together so let's just walk our separate ways....
L lastboltnut Senior Member Mar 23, 2006 4,524 0 36 Where the wind blows... May 16, 2008 #2 Some how I find the far ends a little too dark...
N night86mare Deregistered Aug 25, 2006 25,474 3 38 www.pbase.com May 17, 2008 #3 composition *first* the framing here has included unnecessary elements, which add to the already potentially cluttered main idea (based on your title). there seems to be some problem with exposure here , probably due to lighting conditions.
composition *first* the framing here has included unnecessary elements, which add to the already potentially cluttered main idea (based on your title). there seems to be some problem with exposure here , probably due to lighting conditions.
MarkTan89 Senior Member Jun 30, 2007 591 0 16 Boon Keng May 17, 2008 #4 ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?
ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?
L lastboltnut Senior Member Mar 23, 2006 4,524 0 36 Where the wind blows... May 17, 2008 #5 It looks better now. I find the tonal range lacking....
N night86mare Deregistered Aug 25, 2006 25,474 3 38 www.pbase.com May 17, 2008 #6 MarkTan89 said: ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ? Click to expand... better, yes. but it is still not a strong photograph, don't get me wrong here; i'm not saying that it's horrible.
MarkTan89 said: ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ? Click to expand... better, yes. but it is still not a strong photograph, don't get me wrong here; i'm not saying that it's horrible.