Vivitar Roll #1

[perhapsody]

Hello I am a first-timer and I would like to receive constructive comments/tips on improving hehe

Film: Kodak UltraMax 400

 

[perhapsody]

 

[perhapsody]

Damaged Photos:
(Well, I was so eager to develop the film that I didn't even know the right way to take out from the camera that I exposed some part of the film to the sun and thus.. 5 shots of my entire film was blanked out and the photos below are slightly exposed the sun I think? Haha

And the rest can be found in my flickr!

 

[sumlom]

constructive comments? i feel street shots of people should go closer or shoot them while they are doing something interesting.
but clouds on #5 nice

 

[perhapsody]

Thanks Will work on my 2nd roll