Nice gal. Nice effects.
But think maybe u can take note of some filmmaking basic rules.
If i remember correctly in mass comm class 10 years ago...
Cut on movement.
Avoid 'jump cuts' by not cutting to another scene that looks almost the same as the one before.
If no choice, u can do dissolves/overlapping footage.
Try to shoot one or two long, master shots of each scene, meaning one full length shoot from one position.
Then cut with footage from another position, maybe a close-up.
Got many other rules but i forgot already. These rules make the video smoother looking. Of cos you can choose to break the rules, but must be aware of the effect for the audience.