Unforgettable Jolene


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Nicolas

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Some pics of Jolene from my very 1st model shooting last Sunday at Clark Quay.. thanks Babyfairy for organizing it :)

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Some pics of Jolene from my very 1st model shooting last Sunday at Clark Quay.. thanks Babyfairy for organizing it :)

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:thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup: nice dof.
 

1st- crop lower abit to show elbow.
2nd- too much room above the head.
3rd/4th- watch out for yr colour when post processing. pic is ok.
5th- better with tighter crop. (zoom in after the glass edge on the right)

Just personal comments, don't take it seriously if you don't like.
 

The pictures are OK except that you've composed all of them with the model right in the centre. I feel that the picture with her next to the window could be framed better with the 'rule of thirds' composition.
 

Nice.. you have captured her well indeed. :thumbsup:
 

Good job on these. :D:thumbsup:
 

I like this... reflections is very strong! any help from PP or CPL etc??

Thanks for sharing. :)

i think it was due to the good daylight and glass that produce the nice reflection :)
 

nice shots and cheerful. should play with lights, tonality next time liao :bsmilie: invest in more equipment ;p. add a scrim and a reflector will be much better i guess. Personal opinion no offence.
 

The pictures are OK except that you've composed all of them with the model right in the centre. I feel that the picture with her next to the window could be framed better with the 'rule of thirds' composition.

2nd that! but great try for your 1st time. :thumbsup:
 

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