Try another pp. What do you guy your advise? Still learning process.
Waiting.
Is he coming?
Erm, I give my noob comments:
Picture Number 1:
- The lighting caused the face to look like 2-Dimensional, as if the face was a cut and paste picture onto the body?
- The hands holding the glass? There's this disconnection from the main arm? The lighting on the hand and the arms "may" make people see it as another person's hand?
- The shadows of the glass casted onto her shoulders?
- Lost of details of the hair on her right?
Picture Number 2:
- Lighting abit too harsh for the theme? (I think for both pics lighting is kinda harsh?)
- Picture cropped all at the joints (i.e neck, elbows)?
- The arm in the foreground looked big? Maybe could have shot at a different angle?
But ultimately, we shouldn't restrict ourselves to taking pictures to follow a certain standard? Else there will be no creativity in it? Usually the "wow" pics are those out of the world pics, where it captures more attention and are more interesting? Else we'll be just working towards being another "standard" photographer?
Well its your photograph, so its your own rulez man~ If you think its right, heck it~! Woohoo~! :bsmilie:
(Well...that's what I think :sweat
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