woofmy
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if you do nothing wrong, the flying shoe will not hit you. :bsmilie:
i am not a bush nor a worm.. :bsmilie:
if you do nothing wrong, the flying shoe will not hit you. :bsmilie:
we ish 3P lunch for 2 weeks :bsmilie:
butties, how is this pic?
for the past week i only pp 1 photo. dunno if e pp is too extreme or not
lack of confidence
****... i'm hungry, go eat
give me ur opinion...
later i come back read
bye bye
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hello butties!!
I TIO TOTO AND BROUGHT THESE FOR MY BDAY!!
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THE BOKEH IS SO SWEEEE
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NOT, i only dream! just kidding! hahaha!
butties, how is this pic?
for the past week i only pp 1 photo. dunno if e pp is too extreme or not
lack of confidence
****... i'm hungry, go eat
give me ur opinion...
later i come back read
bye bye
![]()
I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.
butties, how is this pic?
for the past week i only pp 1 photo. dunno if e pp is too extreme or not
lack of confidence
****... i'm hungry, go eat
give me ur opinion...
later i come back read
bye bye
![]()
hello butties!!
I TIO TOTO AND BROUGHT THESE FOR MY BDAY!!
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3390/3266609912_885f25c373.jpg?
THE BOKEH IS SO SWEEEE
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3427/3265782895_125039341b.jpg
her face bit dark....keep drawing to her white shirt...
A bit too high for black level..:think:
Easy on the black and make it softer..
I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.
PP looks ok to me...only thing would be the distraction of the tunnel entrance...maybe can desat or reduce brightness in that area?![]()
her face bit dark....keep drawing to her white shirt...
I am no portrait expert, just giving personal comments.
I do agree with simpleliving. the face ( especially the eye brow and eye shadow ) is a little dark. Her hands and body is brighter than her face, which resulted in the attention drawn away, and also, it is a little bit unnatural ( on the model face ).
I like the processing on the hair.. :heart:
for me, I will adjust the curve on your face area a bit. reduce the darker portion ( on her side of her face ) , while the highlight, remain as it is.... CAUTION : do a small bit of modification at a time..
color temperature a bit too warm... ( for me ) , but should be OK... personal preference only.
I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.
yesh, i find that as the reflectors are fixed, we cant make the model pose in other places, such as against the tunnel walls or squat down etc etc...
also cannot use CLS, quite alot of limitations...![]()
need to sign 3 extras anot? :embrass:if for me, since i am paying her.. i will make her kneel, squat, half squat, bend poses... make full use of the amt paid..
:bsmilie:
A bit too high for black level..:think:
Easy on the black and make it softer..
I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.
PP looks ok to me...only thing would be the distraction of the tunnel entrance...maybe can desat or reduce brightness in that area?![]()
her face bit dark....keep drawing to her white shirt...
I am no portrait expert, just giving personal comments.
I do agree with simpleliving. the face ( especially the eye brow and eye shadow ) is a little dark. Her hands and body is brighter than her face, which resulted in the attention drawn away, and also, it is a little bit unnatural ( on the model face ).
I like the processing on the hair.. :heart:
for me, I will adjust the curve on your face area a bit. reduce the darker portion ( on her side of her face ) , while the highlight, remain as it is.... CAUTION : do a small bit of modification at a time..
color temperature a bit too warm... ( for me ) , but should be OK... personal preference only.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3333/3266069451_1955888aaf.jpg
how abt this?
i adjust the curve, mask then unmask the face, burn e tunnel entrance
thank you very much for your precious commentmuch better :thumbsup: