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butties, how is this pic?
for the past week i only pp 1 photo. dunno if e pp is too extreme or not
lack of confidence
****... i'm hungry, go eat
give me ur opinion...
later i come back read
bye bye

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butties, how is this pic?
for the past week i only pp 1 photo. dunno if e pp is too extreme or not
lack of confidence
****... i'm hungry, go eat
give me ur opinion...
later i come back read
bye bye

3266690002_29c475e88b.jpg


A bit too high for black level..:think:
Easy on the black and make it softer..


I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.
 

butties, how is this pic?
for the past week i only pp 1 photo. dunno if e pp is too extreme or not
lack of confidence
****... i'm hungry, go eat
give me ur opinion...
later i come back read
bye bye

3266690002_29c475e88b.jpg


PP looks ok to me...only thing would be the distraction of the tunnel entrance...maybe can desat or reduce brightness in that area? :)
 

I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.

the place abit too small for 7ppl....so i guess tts y everyone same angle :sweat:
 

butties, how is this pic?
for the past week i only pp 1 photo. dunno if e pp is too extreme or not
lack of confidence
****... i'm hungry, go eat
give me ur opinion...
later i come back read
bye bye

3266690002_29c475e88b.jpg


her face bit dark....keep drawing to her white shirt...
 

her face bit dark....keep drawing to her white shirt...

I am no portrait expert, just giving personal comments.

I do agree with simpleliving. the face ( especially the eye brow and eye shadow ) is a little dark. Her hands and body is brighter than her face, which resulted in the attention drawn away, and also, it is a little bit unnatural ( on the model face ).

I like the processing on the hair.. :heart:

for me, I will adjust the curve on your face area a bit. reduce the darker portion ( on her side of her face ) , while the highlight, remain as it is.... CAUTION : do a small bit of modification at a time..

color temperature a bit too warm... ( for me ) , but should be OK... personal preference only.
 

A bit too high for black level..:think:
Easy on the black and make it softer..


I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.

PP looks ok to me...only thing would be the distraction of the tunnel entrance...maybe can desat or reduce brightness in that area? :)

her face bit dark....keep drawing to her white shirt...

I am no portrait expert, just giving personal comments.

I do agree with simpleliving. the face ( especially the eye brow and eye shadow ) is a little dark. Her hands and body is brighter than her face, which resulted in the attention drawn away, and also, it is a little bit unnatural ( on the model face ).

I like the processing on the hair.. :heart:

for me, I will adjust the curve on your face area a bit. reduce the darker portion ( on her side of her face ) , while the highlight, remain as it is.... CAUTION : do a small bit of modification at a time..

color temperature a bit too warm... ( for me ) , but should be OK... personal preference only.

Thankx for all comments :D appreciate :D tq
 

I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.

yesh, i find that as the reflectors are fixed, we cant make the model pose in other places, such as against the tunnel walls or squat down etc etc...

also cannot use CLS, quite alot of limitations...:(
 

yesh, i find that as the reflectors are fixed, we cant make the model pose in other places, such as against the tunnel walls or squat down etc etc...

also cannot use CLS, quite alot of limitations...:(

if for me, since i am paying her.. i will make her kneel, squat, half squat, bend poses... make full use of the amt paid..
:bsmilie:
 

if for me, since i am paying her.. i will make her kneel, squat, half squat, bend poses... make full use of the amt paid..
:bsmilie:
need to sign 3 extras anot? :embrass:
 

A bit too high for black level..:think:
Easy on the black and make it softer..


I've seen Hevelyn shot's from most butties..i notice 1 thing..no direction in pose and every buttie shooting from same angle.

PP looks ok to me...only thing would be the distraction of the tunnel entrance...maybe can desat or reduce brightness in that area? :)

her face bit dark....keep drawing to her white shirt...

I am no portrait expert, just giving personal comments.

I do agree with simpleliving. the face ( especially the eye brow and eye shadow ) is a little dark. Her hands and body is brighter than her face, which resulted in the attention drawn away, and also, it is a little bit unnatural ( on the model face ).

I like the processing on the hair.. :heart:

for me, I will adjust the curve on your face area a bit. reduce the darker portion ( on her side of her face ) , while the highlight, remain as it is.... CAUTION : do a small bit of modification at a time..

color temperature a bit too warm... ( for me ) , but should be OK... personal preference only.


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how abt this?
i adjust the curve, mask then unmask the face, burn e tunnel entrance :D
 

:cheers: Happy Birthday, Dolby!!! :cheers:​
 

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