Hi, this is my first time posting here. Hope to get some comments. Thanks!
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and techniques. I pp-ed the photo into b&w cause the colour version didnt turn out as i expected due to the bland colour and high iso used. I would like to get some opinions if this is generally acceptable.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I wanted to portray a feeling of sadness and loneliness in this photo. However, it was actually a grandmother with her granddaughter so it turned out pretty surreal in my opinion.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I went for a short one day kelong trip and this was right after the sun set. It was quite a random shot as the subjects didnt exactly know i was taking their photos, even though i know them haha.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I feel that maybe the sky was abit too bright looking due to my pp or my overexposure or i could have turned the figures into silhouettes by underexposing and eliminating the details. Not really sure what to do so I would love to listen to some opinions from you guys.
Thanks for your comments once again!
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and techniques. I pp-ed the photo into b&w cause the colour version didnt turn out as i expected due to the bland colour and high iso used. I would like to get some opinions if this is generally acceptable.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I wanted to portray a feeling of sadness and loneliness in this photo. However, it was actually a grandmother with her granddaughter so it turned out pretty surreal in my opinion.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I went for a short one day kelong trip and this was right after the sun set. It was quite a random shot as the subjects didnt exactly know i was taking their photos, even though i know them haha.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I feel that maybe the sky was abit too bright looking due to my pp or my overexposure or i could have turned the figures into silhouettes by underexposing and eliminating the details. Not really sure what to do so I would love to listen to some opinions from you guys.
Thanks for your comments once again!