Oh! Eagle eye, Alpina! I was actually too distracted with.... Other.... Details....
that i missed out these touch points. Gotta note these things for my own future shoot as well
Thanks, mac!
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Oh! Eagle eye, Alpina! I was actually too distracted with.... Other.... Details....
that i missed out these touch points. Gotta note these things for my own future shoot as well
Thanks, mac!
Pic 6 with strong emphasis on her key asset (eyes) is a rather compelling image.
I also think tnat pic 12 does have some of the exploding from confined space element you wanted.
I do feel some details like the empty hangers were a little excessive. The playing around with the hanger also does not seem to contribute to the picture. Framing effect of the cupboard
may not be immmediately apparent.
Bathroom set... Well dry tub shots sometimes inevitable due to lack of prior prep from organizer side. But shower with underwear seems a little confused in terms of overall concept.
I think when doing a series, as opposed to a single static image, it may be a good idea to establish some relationship in terms of overall flow of the consolidated images. Just my thoughts.
Very beautiful eyes, however the false lashes seem to take centerstage in attracting negative attention. I dont deny the images, though lacking in parts artistic merits, does a good job in promoting melody as a good potential subject. Will keep an eye out for her for future shoot oppotunities.
hey, it's normal if you are a hot blooded male.
i didn't scan the whole picture for flaws but assets in the first place.
:bsmilie:
The bilateral axillary surgical scars in photo #11 and #15 are very distracting... :sweat::bigeyes:
Ai-yai-yai! :bigeyes: Big eyes indeed!You really do know how to make fellow-CS'ers happy with your skills & opportunity of working with her You spent a lot of time on Photoshop n they look so natural, so real, flawless! Great skills, great set and a heart-stopping model! :thumbsup:
Praise the Lord. Thanks people for seeing pass the flaws, i do take note of them. Only God can do a perfect job.
Thanks columbo for your observations.
[Wardrobe series] We started with some lingerie hanging, she did not take the lingerie out 1 by 1 to try on. Those hangers were moved to the extreme right because she need space to stand. Seeing that the lingerie do not serve any purpose, i asked her to move them away. My plan failed, so she started playing with the hangers. I totally forgotten to show the constraint of placing an adult inside a wardrobe.
[Bathroom series] The organiser was not around during the shoot, we never misbehaved. I think dry is okay but wet is even better for this series. Nobody has flash except me. The other photographers used the lamp from the bedroom. It never cross my mind to ask melody to strip and jump into the tub fill with water and rose petals and wine bubbles and of course her patch which many people spotted. I was a bit confused when she said something was showing when we started the whole shoot. Maybe her bra slip or something. The patch was really invisible to me at that time.
[Series concept] How i wish i could orchestra the whole shoot and show you a flow of the photographs truly as a series. I gave up that idea long ago because i can never afford private shoot, unless it is free. Therefore, everything was impromptu. Melody has some great ideas too.
[False lashes] Women love them because they enhanced their look. I have no comments except maybe they can upgrade their skill to convince you that they are real lashes.
[Artistic merit] I definitely lacking in the art aspect. Maybe i get a degree for that.
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when guys see b**bs and big round eyes... they forget about everything else about photography.... didn't like the closet set though. but the lighting for the rest was good.
what took the cake for me was the shower scene :bsmilie:
ok crap. i forgot the rest of what i was. there are two very obvious distractions floating in my mind right now. crap.. blood's flowing elsewhere...
the model's expressions need more working on. she's got no expressions and her poses seem pretty stiff and unnatural to me.
that's it for me. i need to find somewhere to cool off now :sweat:
what took the cake for me was the shower scene :bsmilie:
ok crap. i forgot the rest of what i was. there are two very obvious distractions floating in my mind right now. crap.. blood's flowing elsewhere...
the model's expressions need more working on. she's got no expressions and her poses seem pretty stiff and unnatural to me.
that's it for me. i need to find somewhere to cool off now :sweat:
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