Rina & Carol


sui.... carol has very nice features :)
 

I like Kongo style- causal and comfortable

If I were you... raining and only can shot in MRT... I probably won't able to achieve something.... hahaha
 

Please number your photos so that everyone can write their preferences on the individual photos. Try to improve your composition and avoid cropping bits and pieces away from the model. For example, the #3, bit of her elbow has been cropped away. Anyway, thanks for sharing.

Sorry...all i can say is LOL :D
 

dude,to me u r just a critic who has no pic to show of n most of ur posts r just "ups" in PhotoShoots sub board. :thumbsd:

LOLX!!
 

--形--意-俱全,好作品!
 

hey bro.. long time no see...
this series is still good.. esp given the conditions.. i think u did great... cheers..
 

Please number your photos so that everyone can write their preferences on the individual photos. Try to improve your composition and avoid cropping bits and pieces away from the model. For example, the #3, bit of her elbow has been cropped away. Anyway, thanks for sharing.

do a historical search on both of u...between u and kongo..u need to improve ur composition, and yr taste of the selection of the pics..
 

:thumbsup: once again ur photos always gt the feel :)
 

Beautifully done! Nice!!:thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:
 

nice shots! you certainly havn't 'rusted' much!

TBH, some of Tirimasu's points are valid, perhaps its just the condescending tone in which he puts his point across. Should we put him down just because of his photos? I don't think we need good photos to 'qualify' to critique here, do we?
 

nice shots! you certainly havn't 'rusted' much!

TBH, some of Tirimasu's points are valid, perhaps its just the condescending tone in which he puts his point across. Should we put him down just because of his photos? I don't think we need good photos to 'qualify' to critique here, do we?

Yup he is right about the cropping of small part of the model's arm in 1 of the pictures.
However, the way he commented sound like he is superior to kongo (condescending tone as you mentioned) was not appropiate unless he has shown his talent in term of the work he has done. I don't think even DP will use condescending tone on Kongo.
Besides, I don't see any superior talent from the way he commented on other people pictures. Just my view....
 

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He's only an upzz upzz guy.
 

nice series. thanks for sharing.!;)
 

How did I get involve in this cake vs kongo ...

Anyway, yes, I would go ballistic if my model wore that bra with the ugly strap showing. Absolutely unacceptable. But if Kongo can accept, fine lor.
 

How did I get involve in this cake vs kongo ...

Anyway, yes, I would go ballistic if my model wore that bra with the ugly strap showing. Absolutely unacceptable. But if Kongo can accept, fine lor.

Yup he is right about the cropping of small part of the model's arm in 1 of the pictures.
However, the way he commented sound like he is superior to kongo (condescending tone as you mentioned) was not appropiate unless he has shown his talent in term of the work he has done. I don't think even DP will use condescending tone on Kongo.
Besides, I don't see any superior talent from the way he commented on other people pictures. Just my view....


Uh oh .....now what?:p
 

Hahaha.. yup yup, he already did..

Didnt notice that one, I have the tendency to overlook those bra strap.. haha..
but agree that probably will look better without the strap here.

Managed to remember to pp away the bra strap for this one though:

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:bsmilie:

it's also a very flattering angle.

i bet DP would comment on the strap though. ;)
 

wah Kongo photos is as usual so happening.. :bsmilie:
work is still as usual nice, just that natural light is bad, due to rain but this won't stop Kongo de.. :bsmilie:

超正~ :thumbsup:
 

Wow many bros come to support me huh? haha.. it's ok lah, after all these years I am very immune le..

For this shoot I just wanna go out and relax n exercise my 老骨头.. hehe

Anyway it's true that I did cropped away some elbows, hand, fingers, hair, head etc etc.. it's also ok that someone feels that such cropping is undesirable, just individual preferences ba. So Tirimasu's point isnt invalid, and these points are like Generally Accepted Portriature Principles (G.A.P.P.) in CS nowsaday.. :bsmilie:

For my case, I tends to place more emphasis on other things, such as whether the image is flattering to the models, whether the image got feel etc.. if I think the plus points outweigh the minus points I ll hv no issue to post the pics up, even if they are not perfect. There are no perfect pics anyway.. haha..

For this series, I am agreeable that for #1 & #3, it ll be better if I didnt crop the elbow, but I included both pics in the series anyway as I still like them despite that fact.

Ignoring the cropping part and just talk about composition, I do honestly wish that I can improve in that aspect. A china portrait master that I hugely respect also commented that there are room for improvements in my composition skill in my poco threads.

No comments on the tone used though.. hehe
 

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Being humble as you always are, keeps you on the road for more improvements bro.
Well done again :thumbsup:
 

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