Putting aside the name and title - Critique This

[cabbySHE]

I've asked Nguyen for his comments on this story.... will post them once he replies

Is he too busy to reply ? One week has gone by.

 

[ed9119]

maybe, he is busy

he has not replied to my request ...... but i will ask again this evening when i get home

 

[ovaltinemilo]

While I do find this pic interesting, I do hv sm issue with the oof face. If it's intentional, then mayby abit more oof would be better coz it feels like this photo was taken hastily and has the by-chance feeling...none-the-less, this pic is interesting enough to spur us to think of wat actually happened then...

 

[ed9119]

Nguyen said that he did not want to add his comments ... his english is not too good.... just told me to thank you guys and that he appreciates the feedback

 

[wildcat]

I suppose I am supposed to learn something from all this :embrass:

 

[ed9119]

up to u brother.

 

[wootsk]

I just felt that his left arm is sprayed with a shirt on. preferable he wear a rag shirt or spray the colour evenly. cause it caught my attention for very long after screening the photo around and found that the line between his clean body and dirty arm seems very off.

Pardon for my poor english or explaination hope TS gets what I mean.

 

[bobdoom]

BOBDOOM? :think:

Sorry Ed, couldn't help noticing the resemblance.

OK, back to Ed's transmission.

this is not me.... i look better..... LOL

 

[XavierShoot]

i open the pic and get a shock of my life that i forget how to give feedback =(

 

[daredevil123]

It is refreshing to see this again after 2.5 years. Now I can fully understand the impact of this shot. Thanks to Bobdoom for reviving this thread.

 

[Jiannn L]

This picture is interesting.

Blur face and the little bit of smoke coming out from his mouth is kinda distracting to me.
I would prefer his face is sharp and since there's a cigarette in his mouth.. Maybe can have more smoke(Smoky Feeling) on his left side *Right side of the image*..

His left hand seems awkward to me and his right hand maybe can lay on the locker (No. 83).

The black thing on top of his left shoulder is kinda distracting and it looks like something pop out from his body ​