Tiredofallthese
Senior Member
Nice attempt.
I wish more guys are less shy like you about posting photos here and talking about improving them (and improve their skill level in the process)
:thumbsup:
Composition :
I think it can be improved with a basic rule of thirds placement of the horizon.
One problem here is that there is no interesting point in the waters nor the sky (eg. reflection or fiery sky)
So both water and sky does not add much to the photo except a mass of black (or yellow in this case)
Maybe think about a 16x9 format landscape crop.
Otherwise, it can help to work a bit to find some foreground or find some sort of leading line towards the CBD area.
I like to think of it like a "As if the object is looking at the backround"
Eg. The rock is looking at the CBD
For me, the workflow would be pretty generic.
1. Get WB right first (on your RAW converter)
The shot is too yellow.
Check the WB or play around to get the right one.
You may also need to add more magenta to offset the yellows.
If you can afford the time, why not try those out and post the adjusted photo and we can see how it goes.![]()
Agreed....learning never end...
