Night water scene across the jurong lake

[IsenGrim]

This is my best shot since my old chinese garden one.

Please let me know where can i improve on~ hahha i know like composition wise or idea wise.
(its hosted on fb so the quality might be degraded a little. original vibrancy is a little higher)

 

[manutd8613]

This is nice .... but looks very empty ... why dont u just fill in the flat areas in to your frame will looks better ...

 

[nysheng]

focal point too small leh..would like to see the buildlings bigger...esp when ur sky is not very interesting..

 

[jackzhangxiao]

i think this would be better . . .