Hahahahaha... Your angles are fine. But you lighting is NOT.
See below for how the real thing is done
Look at their lighting, and look at your lighting... HUGE DIfference !!!
Notice how every single reflection is showing off the contours of the car.
Let me clarify... It's your LIGHTING-Dynamics which are not there...
btw, Shooting cars (NOT miniatures) is the Hardest things to shoot...
The question is NOT if there is an image, or whether it is sharp. The question now, is HOW GOOD is the image?
I smell another chicken rice session, and a shopping trip to Popular Bookstore, if you want to
pursue this... hahahaha