:: My iPod and I ::

[tdubs]

nice pic...

What headphones models are they?

 

[mattlock]

jingna made me change this post.

 

[simon80]

i think it will look very sexy if ur doing some pedicure or someting

aniway cant see the ipod .. headphone taking too much attention

 

[Del_CtrlnoAlt]

meh~ 110 views and not one comment? T___T

hmm comment on the model (U) or the photographer (who did not ask for comments) cos i find the pic abit strange.

 

[Youhong]

Legs don't look relaxed... From facial expression, don't seem to enjoy the music... :what:

Overall, nice attempt coz IMHO, I suggest many will put it at the bed settings... Something different... :think:

 

[bufferin]

dont like the tangled wire
dont like shadow on right inner thigh
dont like awkward ankle/toe alignment on left foot
dont like coloration on right ankle due to light falloff probably
dont like tilted desk presumably caused by picture taken with camera above eye level

kthxbye

 

[GanS_n_PoserS]

dont like the tangled wire
dont like shadow on right inner thigh
dont like awkward ankle/toe alignment on left foot
dont like coloration on right ankle due to light falloff probably
dont like tilted desk presumably caused by picture taken with camera above eye level

kthxbye

so what are your solutions to the above mentioned? care to share.. ?

 

[TMC]

my only point is that the table looks distorted, gives a contorted look to that end of the pic.

 

[pisces25]

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

 

[zaxh81]

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

care to share why :thumbsup: :thumbsup: ?

 

[Del_CtrlnoAlt]

comments welcomed, feel free to complain about the fat thighs and ugly model~ kthksbye

ah well think i got nothing to do now... [critic mode activate]

i find this pic's composition really poor, y? unless you have violent objective towards this point, do allow me to explain...

1) too much empty space on the top,... ya can be something like a promotion shot or something, but the table kills the composition, cos if u wanted some empty space on top like that, make sure your table is not cut like that, there is a distracting support on the lower right corner which i guess is 1 of the other leg. Its better to find a smaller table, or find a long cupboard without the empty space below.

2) model seem to be in feet agony and face shows otherwise. Its very strange for someone with a relax, bochup face, yet the feet seem to tense like its having spasm.

3) misleading title, Ipod & I, yes i see the I, but where is the Ipod?

4) dark spot in the inner thigh of the right leg, maybe can remove off

5) 1 spot maybe sensor dust infront of model's face

6) Proportion of space on the left not in sync with proportion of space on right, cos it isn't a 'moving' pic which ask the model to drop forward, the space created in front is seemingly useless, but then, unless there is a tag line on the upper left corner to justify the composition, it would be better.

(**** boss call liao... gtg...)

 

[mattlock]

the thighs could be juicier...heh heh.
and really these criticisms seem to be missing the point
technical aspects aside I think that there's a lovely mood to it but of course this isn't the best picture...there's a much better picture that will blow everyone away
right jingna?

 

[Hexlord]

Nice pose, nice legs and nice headset!

However I won't be able to tell if you are using an iPod from this angle though.

Faving it if you posted it up on your DA though

 

[Del_CtrlnoAlt]

the thighs could be juicier...heh heh.
and really these criticisms seem to be missing the point
technical aspects aside I think that there's a lovely mood to it but of course this isn't the best picture...there's a much better picture that will blow everyone away
right jingna?

care 2 share?

 

[zivlai]

not bad
but i cant see the ipod clearly:bsmilie:

 

[zemotion]

the thighs could be juicier...heh heh.
and really these criticisms seem to be missing the point
technical aspects aside I think that there's a lovely mood to it but of course this isn't the best picture...there's a much better picture that will blow everyone away
right jingna?

The point is. I didn't DI this picture and it makes a difference to small things! And the other thing is. Yun titled it wrongly!!! This was supposed to be ABOUT the headphones, right? now the ipod!!!

LAlalalalaaa. I love my model.

 

[W.Kwai]

I wonder would black & white be better. :think:

 

[Kagetsuki]

i think it will look very sexy if ur doing some pedicure or someting

aniway cant see the ipod .. headphone taking too much attention

honestly~ all the talk about not being able to see the ipod. If I had faced it towards the camera, I'd expect to hear things like "why is the ipod not facing the model, it's unrealistic" or "the ipod looks weird facing away the model and towards the camera"

and it's my ipod~! I get to see it. muahahhaha~!!! ~~~

 

[Del_CtrlnoAlt]

honestly~ all the talk about not being able to see the ipod. If I had faced it towards the camera, I'd expect to hear things like "why is the ipod not facing the model, it's unrealistic" or "the ipod looks weird facing away the model and towards the camera"

and it's my ipod~! I get to see it. muahahhaha~!!! ~~~

huh? u sound funny... :think: oh well... life goes on, u happy enuff liao....

 

[pisces25]

care to share why :thumbsup: :thumbsup: ?

IMHO, beauty is in the eye of the beholder. What constitute nice, pretty might be ugly to others. What is unsightly could be art to another.