My first try at Fashion in the city

[airforce1]

Join the Fashion in the city shoot. As it is my first try I have no idea what to shoot and decided to do portrait of the model Rachel and Corina. Here my photos for kind comment and critique.

Rachel

Rachel

Corina

Corina

 

[leejay]

Corina is cool; Rach is chio.

:cheergal:

 

[airforce1]

Thanks leejay. They are cool model and good to work with.

 

[airforce1]

Another of Rachel. Please critic for mr to learnt. Thanks.

 

[versatile]

Sorry but i can see Rae's bra strips and bra on her transparent shirt. If it's not visible, it would be a great pic.

 

[~Arcanic~]

Another of Rachel. Please critic for mr to learnt. Thanks.

your first 4 pics look quite pixelated... maybe its due to your resizing and compression?

anyway, i like this shot the best. the greenish cast works for me here (personal preference), maybe can go wider and get a full body shot?

 

[arielmermaid]

Join the Fashion in the city shoot. As it is my first try I have no idea what to shoot and decided to do portrait of the model Rachel and Corina. Here my photos for kind comment and critique.

Rachel

Rachel

Corina

Corina

both models seem to be able to "Talk" to u and ur cam, showing that they were v comfortable in taking te pic n posing for u. good job!

 

[airforce1]

arielmermaid---Thanks for the comment, it is not easy to get the right moment as have to wait for my turn to shoot. It is group outing.

versatile-- I like the eyes to behold the viewers. Thanks.

arcanic--Thanks. I have only 85mm lenses. Regret never bring wide.

leejay--Thanks.

Hope to learn from all of you. cheers.