Welly Agus
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Don't know bro, she like it that way , tks anyway
My First Attempt in Studio Shoot
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Another shoot edited in GOLDIE EFEX
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Welly Agus
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Friends, appreciate your comment for my last edited GOLDIE EFEX. Tks
NineEleven
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Tks Bro , Here another Stunning pose by the model. What I did only increase the brightness and a bit smoothing the Skin. Please let me have your comment.
Nine elevent hope no more crease on her Breast !
Still slightly visible mate & do pay attention to smoothing her skin. Her nose, eye shadows & jawline area are untouched? Over time, I realised that it must be consistent even down to her neckline. I don't know which function you used as I'm a beginner too but I use the blur tool & turn it down to 30-50% strength & work slowly rather than 100%. Some guys do layering then Gaussian tool?
Welly Agus
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Tks Roger, will do the mood will remain. hope to learn more in Studio environment .tks
Welly Agus
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yes bro smoothing tool I use Light room 4 only, in CS 5 just add my watermarking , not good in Photo shop . this editing only using my Mac book Pro. Tks again
Good try with the composition. IMHO, I would shoot with the wrist closer to the body so that I can crop with the head only slightly off centre to the photo (currently the head is a bit too far to the right). If you crop with the current photo you loose too much of the hand. Maybe try rotating the photo to achieve this crop. Open up the lower neckline (showing less of the fur coat) as the photo is bottom heavy. Darken slightly the neck, ear & hand (to give focus to the face) and improve the overall 3D effect. Basics are there
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Welly Agus
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Wow Rogerrrrr, Thanks mate!, seem so easy for you bro ha ha ha. I will try again some other shoot perhaps may given better composition. Once again tks
#1 is good. Keep it simple is good. thanks for sharing.Seem the Picture not appearing in my side. Here again >
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Sorry seem too complicated posting picture here, not like in FB ha ha ha
Welly Agus
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Dear Roger, Please see if this kind of Cropping is in proper and tasty .
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New Image here below in high key, somehow when I reduce the pixel the body tone become dark. Can't help it originally clean and crisp. Please let me have your comment. tks
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New Image here below in high key, somehow when I reduce the pixel the body tone become dark. Can't help it originally clean and crisp. Please let me have your comment. tks
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Welly Agus
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Tks bro , simple is the goal tks again
Hi Bro,
You have been busy. IMHO, once again nice moody feel, I like the ratios, slight greenish tone you will need to correct. As usual, darken hand slightly, under neck should have a hint of space & detail (show some jawline). Darken patch of fur coat at bottom right of photo, a bit distracting and heavy. Try moving the head slightly to the left to give some breathing space to the right edge, black triangle on the top left is too heavy as is eventhough you try to go for a diagonal composition (there is already a triangular composition).
If you are going for classical high key, go all the way; I prefer the scarf to be white (darker ratio over the body to show detail of scarf) or alternately a light yellow scarf to offset from the background. Watch the creases on neck/armpit (heal to soften). Being picky now, try to get the flying scarf into some shape instead of straight (looks like being pulled or held).
You have been busy. IMHO, once again nice moody feel, I like the ratios, slight greenish tone you will need to correct. As usual, darken hand slightly, under neck should have a hint of space & detail (show some jawline). Darken patch of fur coat at bottom right of photo, a bit distracting and heavy. Try moving the head slightly to the left to give some breathing space to the right edge, black triangle on the top left is too heavy as is eventhough you try to go for a diagonal composition (there is already a triangular composition).
If you are going for classical high key, go all the way; I prefer the scarf to be white (darker ratio over the body to show detail of scarf) or alternately a light yellow scarf to offset from the background. Watch the creases on neck/armpit (heal to soften). Being picky now, try to get the flying scarf into some shape instead of straight (looks like being pulled or held).
Welly Agus
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Wow Roger Seem you are great / master in composition for Model!, Tks for your advice for GOldie EFEX , yes it is a bit greenish . need to adjust my color tone again to make it pure Goldie.
As for High Key actually it is Red scarf and it is full body shoot where the model jump and makes the scarf fly. No one pull or hold the scarf. See my original image in flicker as I am afraid to upload here. ha ha ha
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As for High Key actually it is Red scarf and it is full body shoot where the model jump and makes the scarf fly. No one pull or hold the scarf. See my original image in flicker as I am afraid to upload here. ha ha ha
WA7_9195 | Flickr - Photo Sharing!
Welly Agus
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Tks bro , perhaps other part also delicate to be touch wakakakakak
Welly Agus
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roger8 said:Just sharing lah....
Tks bro , you inspire me to shoot better !
happyranchu
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I love this photo.
Welly Agus
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happyranchu said:
Tks bro, need to learn more
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