spongeboob
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Oh ya one more thing, whats the fees for hiring you? Is it ok if i tell u the theme and concepts of our magazine cover on friday? once our producer decides the theme that is. Pls reply asap
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erm i have pmed u already thx u for ur support im just a hobbyist actually not a professional thx for ur compliment though would be awesome if u mail me the name of the name of th emag and the duration of the shoot =)
Haydenhuang
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Nice, u r indeed quite good to achieve this within a short span of time
thx well i did alot of planning before hand the shot started at 5.45 to 9 plus and we are all having fun lol mroe of a casual shoot than a serious one=)
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img30 4 the day hehe
img31 pool anyone?
img31 pool anyone?
fidelistoh
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I love your processing! Eg, Img 9!
The vintage feel looks sooooo good! :heart:
And and and! Your house is soooo pretty!
The vintage feel looks sooooo good! :heart:
And and and! Your house is soooo pretty!
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fidelistoh really appreciate ur comments!=)
come to think of it u are right!
thx =)
like many others, we will be envious of your beautiful home and settings, it really is simple but well furnished. some processing matched the vintage feel very well, most others simply failed.
i feel is because many looked like snapshots and candid, this cant be a candid series for sure! haha like mentioned by others, too many of everything thus the lack of consistency.
take for example the last pic i thought at least include more balls, that's quite the very basics of a subject and its surroundings. perhaps a lower angle.
nice model, will like to see more shots on the couch.
just sharing my views, take no offence bro. =)
i feel is because many looked like snapshots and candid, this cant be a candid series for sure! haha like mentioned by others, too many of everything thus the lack of consistency.
take for example the last pic i thought at least include more balls, that's quite the very basics of a subject and its surroundings. perhaps a lower angle.
nice model, will like to see more shots on the couch.
just sharing my views, take no offence bro. =)
Haydenhuang
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hello sprintist really love ur shots=) ya i have to admit this shoot wasnt very serious some of it is snap shots like for example the pool shot was shot when we were playing pool hence the balls being scarce and stuff=( i will try to take note of some of those awful processing and try to make every shot a planned shot next time love ur comments really constructive=)
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img32 pillow fight
img32 pillow fight
This shot will surely cause a lot of imaginations to run wild on here.
I don't know where to start.
What this entire data dump looked like is a series of snap shots taken when 2 young girls visited your condo. I like the fact that you did managed so many different shots in such confined space. The ability to use and work around restrictions is a very powerful skill. That said we are still talking about photography.
In general, the lightings are either too flat or too harsh. The composition is haphazardly done. They appeared that "NO" thoughts were given, and I am sure you had been thinking and planning for this shoot for a long time. Isn't that a tragedy, you did the work, and it came across that you did nothing, and the whole efforts looked sloppy. The posing is, well, 2 girls playing fooling around. What were you trying to bring across? The backgrounds are too cluttered, and often competed with the models for attention.
This not a series to be proud of. Better learned from it. Meaning, don't do most of the things you did in this series again. You may do better next time.
What this entire data dump looked like is a series of snap shots taken when 2 young girls visited your condo. I like the fact that you did managed so many different shots in such confined space. The ability to use and work around restrictions is a very powerful skill. That said we are still talking about photography.
In general, the lightings are either too flat or too harsh. The composition is haphazardly done. They appeared that "NO" thoughts were given, and I am sure you had been thinking and planning for this shoot for a long time. Isn't that a tragedy, you did the work, and it came across that you did nothing, and the whole efforts looked sloppy. The posing is, well, 2 girls playing fooling around. What were you trying to bring across? The backgrounds are too cluttered, and often competed with the models for attention.
This not a series to be proud of. Better learned from it. Meaning, don't do most of the things you did in this series again. You may do better next time.
Haydenhuang
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Hello dp=) thx for ur wonderful comments will keep that in mind i actually got a theme goin in my facebook but i have no idea why i random post them here lol and ya i need to strive to be better i guess thx for ur constructive criticism
yes i did=)
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This shot will surely cause a lot of imaginations to run wild on here.
haha but seriously didnt wanna do too much of these kind of shots firstly the lighting in my room is miserable and secondly my bed will be on the verge of breaking down!
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