Miyake at my place

[Canew]

Take note of the eyelashes. They seemed crumpled/fused together.

 

[orislee]

well..photos could be improved for sure..but i think your place is very nice to do a "long series" with many models. Click on the following link to get some inspiration (by a professional German photographer, warning: nudity!):

http://www.pbase.com/dudedelux/the_red_chair

Please attend to the details on how he did the lighting and guide the Modelmayhem models for poses. Do not be distracted by the pretty nude models.

I think if I were you, I will start a similar series like him. Remember to jio me if i go to Singapore
again hahahaha

 

[Juristium]

Bro, Seriously your place looks very grand....

 

[Haydenhuang]

Take note of the eyelashes. They seemed crumpled/fused together.

will take note and tell model abt it or maybe try to be more active and tell her to remove her contacts hehe thx

well..photos could be improved for sure..but i think your place is very nice to do a "long series" with many models. Click on the following link to get some inspiration (by a professional German photographer, warning: nudity!):

http://www.pbase.com/dudedelux/the_red_chair

Please attend to the details on how he did the lighting and guide the Modelmayhem models for poses. Do not be distracted by the pretty nude models.

I think if I were you, I will start a similar series like him. Remember to jio me if i go to Singapore
again hahahaha

thx for ur suggestion really love constructive criticism like urs so i can learn=)

Bro, Seriously your place looks very grand....

thx u=)

 

[Haydenhuang]

img 24

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img26

img27

img28

 

[cckue]

I quite like 12, 18 and 23. For img 4, it will be good if the model look up to the camera.
Anyway, good try.

 

[Haydenhuang]

I quite like 12, 18 and 23. For img 4, it will be good if the model look up to the camera.
Anyway, good try.

haha thx for comment and thx for the exotic frog dinner treat!

 

[Haydenhuang]

I quite like 12, 18 and 23. For img 4, it will be good if the model look up to the camera.
Anyway, good try.

i kinda like img 4 too was really unplanned for that shot she took my shirt specs and radiology book and i started to shoot lol

 

[Haydenhuang]

img29 this shot i use my black tainited mirror for reflection

 

[zoren]

nice place you have hayden.

 

[Haydenhuang]

img30

img31

thx zoren had alot of fun doin this tfcd

 

[luna_sea83]

Nice place, Nice model, nice photos... oh shd i say cute model? :bsmilie:

 

[Haydenhuang]

Nice place, Nice model, nice photos... oh shd i say cute model? :bsmilie:

wah nice compliment lunasea

 

[JacePhoto]

Good pictures, styling etc, but too eager to show your sets. Hence the whole look and feel is 'mixed up'.

Should show each sets as it is, i.e Girl with man's shirt as #1, Girl on crouch as #2 series, Girl in black dress as #3.

Two cents worth.

my concept runs in my original series im posting some of it here hence the mix up and style ya maybe i need more style and composition maybe need more compo haha thx for ur question though

 

[Haydenhuang]

Good pictures, styling etc, but too eager to show your sets. Hence the whole look and feel is 'mixed up'.

Should show each sets as it is, i.e Girl with man's shirt as #1, Girl on crouch as #2 series, Girl in black dress as #3.

Two cents worth.

that is a very good point -) thx u was trying initially to put up the pics i think needs C&C so i tried to mix and match to make it interesting and not dull ,guess i was wrong would do that next time!

 

[ndroo]

seems like ur place very "atas" must have a rich dad.
hahahaha

This comment is unnecessary :nono:

 

[Haydenhuang]

This comment is unnecessary :nono:

haha its ok any comments is fine with me im just trying to learn. my hse isnt really grand it doesnt have a dinning table if u steal my sofa my living room will be empty haha. but i guess |less is more" lmao. I was initially really into indie alternative victorian photography but this model really influence me to accept jap photography lol maybe will try that out next series!

 

[luna_sea83]

Its a nice place u have for ur shoots, but only if the lightning was somehow better, did u use any strobes n reflectors on it?

 

[Haydenhuang]

Its a nice place u have for ur shoots, but only if the lightning was somehow better, did u use any strobes n reflectors on it?

yep used a reflector my bed room esp has got limited lightings lol

 

[spongeboob]

Wow i like your compositions esp img1 and img6. It has a really unique tone taste and a really nice focus on the model's face. The setting tells alot about your taste in photography too. Are you running like a vintage victoriany style? I really like it.

Btw would u mind pm-ing me your contacts? i would like u to shoot for my magazine cover, nxt months issue if u dont mind. thanks.