[MGohzxc] Scapes @ 11


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:thumbsup: (So happy for u always got nice sky.) Share more to us. :)
 

the lighting in #100 is definitely much better than that in #99.

can't say i'm a fan of that last picture. firstly, it seems a little awkward that the twig-thing is entirely in shadow while the rest of the grass has light falling on it. granted this is entirely possible, it's definitely not intuitive and i would make the effort to do exposure blending to reveal some detail, or to opt out of including it at all. understand that you also want to include the various parts of the sky that are orange-magenta, but that glaring break in the continuity of the grass on the left side is extremely distracting.

not sure why, but i am seeing some haloing in the grass as well. compositionally, my thoughts are that it looks like someone pasted that twig-thing in the picture, and it is not distinct enough as a silhouette to garner sufficient interest for me; nor does it hold much interest. i would probably opt out of this scene and look for something else in the area to shoot.
 

the lighting in #100 is definitely much better than that in #99.

can't say i'm a fan of that last picture. firstly, it seems a little awkward that the twig-thing is entirely in shadow while the rest of the grass has light falling on it. granted this is entirely possible, it's definitely not intuitive and i would make the effort to do exposure blending to reveal some detail, or to opt out of including it at all. understand that you also want to include the various parts of the sky that are orange-magenta, but that glaring break in the continuity of the grass on the left side is extremely distracting.

not sure why, but i am seeing some haloing in the grass as well. compositionally, my thoughts are that it looks like someone pasted that twig-thing in the picture, and it is not distinct enough as a silhouette to garner sufficient interest for me; nor does it hold much interest. i would probably opt out of this scene and look for something else in the area to shoot.
Hello Uncle Night86mare and how are you? Thanks for the C&C.
I agree that #100 is better for the lighting. For #99, just happen to take the last shot after dinner and on the way home with my mum and Dad. Is school holiday now and can stay up late. Actually this shot was taken very low almost to the water. You should try it and I think it would be great for you. Maybe...

OK for #101, it was taken this evening on the other side of Upper seletar.
I was walking up and down the slope to look for composition and nothing really much also. Than slip and fall from the slope. Luckily it was on the grass and just slide down. But nothing really happen.
There was some people there fishing and one of them actually use this twig to rest his fishing rod. After awhile he went away and I thought that using this twig would be an idea for some composition. Yes, I agree that this twig is not sufficient enough to be good in this way for composition. Btw, the sky was about to rain and suddenly it change totally.I did not adjust any WB for the sky. only saturate a little and add vibrance.
I will post another one and I think would be slightly better to view the twig at a much later sky light.
Thanks so much
 

OK for #101, it was taken this evening on the other side of Upper seletar.
I was walking up and down the slope to look for composition and nothing really much also. Than slip and fall from the slope. Luckily it was on the grass and just slide down. But nothing really happen.

do take care.

i have been to USR once, and was blessed with nice clouds that worked well with a simple mirror-surface composition.

the part where the people fish is quite bare, i know what you mean.
 

do take care.

i have been to USR once, and was blessed with nice clouds that worked well with a simple mirror-surface composition.

the part where the people fish is quite bare, i know what you mean.
thanks uncle night86mare. I will be careful and will try more composition.
 

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Just some pretty sky

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#108 processing... did you use layers of different exposures? can see the halo and shadow overlap. you need to be more detailed with your masking.
 

#108 processing... did you use layers of different exposures? can see the halo and shadow overlap. you need to be more detailed with your masking.

Hello emlee, thanks for the C&C. yes is different layers exposures. will take note.
Thanks so much..:)
 

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