i spy with my little eye

[eadwine]

kid on stairs looking at the big screen

 

[Daniel]

It would have been better if you got part of the big screen which so captivates the boy. For the 2nd pic, with the boy looking at the left, the point of interest should therefore be on the left, the big space on the right is disturbing.

 

[StreetShooter]

Someone once told me that in composing a picture, the main subject should be looking INTO the frame rather than out of it.

In this case, the boy should be more to the right side of the picture.

 

[eadwine]

ya i kinda see that, but i had some constraints cos i might capture a big head blocking me if i took it.
anyway...theres room for improvements! thanks guys =)