ellery said:Nice try.
question what is it that you are trying to show her ?
Most of the pictures do not work as a portraiture, nor do they work as glamour and they are definitely not fashion.
Did you notice in picture 2 you have some serious distortion that's not good for portraiture work ?
they need more work pre clicking and during the shoot itself. But they are better than an snap shots.
Sorry, I'm just a newbie. Would learn and take better pics next time. :sweat: