1.in what area is critique to be sought?B]
Hi, this is the first time posting in gallery, do need more advice.
I'd like to know about the pp. I had crop out the lower part to balance the top part, and somehow decrease the saturation of the background to bring up the subject. I want to show the emotion that the subject gaves.
2.what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I want to show in a public street like this, there is this family who doze off while walking, a contrast to the street.
3.under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
This picture was taken after a long day walk out in town, and trying to capture some nice, interesting candid shots of the street. It came out at first to be a normal street shots, until i noticed that these family are synchronised in a way that they closed their eyes, and head downs, I planned to bring out the subject in a way that portray a dozing family; tiring family after a long day walk in town.
4.what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Personally, i thought i had did the best to portray what i intend to get, but still i do want to get professional advice from you guys, how i can improve further.