Looked like an desperate attempt to save a badly exposed picture. Well, why really does nto matter. However, the shadow on the cheek looks really weird, the colors are all off, looks like the result of some serious adjustment of levels/curves.
What is that patch right in front of her ear? Appears to be a botched DI job, a failed attempt to DI out hair?
The DI on the face is way over done. Defuse glow, inversed defused glow, or whatever, it does not matter. The end result is not pleasing.
The eyes lack life. The eyes are the window to the soul. They give life to the image. They are dead in this image.
Did you try to shave her eyebrow in photoshop?
Necklace is distracting. The lack of detail in the hair is distracting. The thumb poking her eye is distracting, and added unnecessary shadow to her eye.
This is a total mess. The hair styling, the necklace, a total mess on her back. The eye shadow is way too heavy handed. The lighting on her head, all over the map, just another mess.
Nothing really wrong with this picture, it is just unflattering to the model. Her face looks long as a horse, her arm looks chubby, her eyes lack life, and you amputated her hands!
The pose is very unflattering. Her legs look like a tree trunk. Not fat, not big, just lack grace.
The lighting is flat and uneven.
Do you want shadow or not? Make up your mind. Right now, there is a faint shadow, and that cries "carelessness".
Again, learn what not to do in DI. The DI is way over the board. Do less, master simple techniques, learn the basic. Do those well before you start clicking randomly to see if you got somthing presentable.
Look at magazines, look at other photographers' work, shoot more, when there is an one liner comment, it generally means your picture CMI.
