"The Man"? as in? Do u mean as the title?
If "the man" is referring to the uncle that 's the only one in color, then i dun think he is prominent enough. Took me a while to find the man. Thus i dun think that the title u plan to use is appropriate...
This seems more like a night landscape shot but the horizon seems tilted to me and a bit soft, u must be using a large aperture for the shot. i think it might be better to crop away the shadows at the corners they are too distracting and does not add to the mood of the picture.
Just my 2 cents...