Zi Yi - Winter Season

[cordonbleu]

just did a shoot last Sunday. Quite freezing outside..
its quite hard to held 70-200mm lens in the winter and strong wind..
Model: 子毅 (ZiYi)
Location: Beijing
C&C please, thanks..

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[kel77]

Have more variations in the poses. You have a good looking model to work with.

 

[nikkie]

basically to showcase a pretty face?
i didn't feel the winter in the scene since it's too little of the background. can be spring too.
how about some snow?

 

[night86mare]

#1 works best, maybe more space on the left by stepping back a bit.

i will really agree with kel77, to me, if there are 5 pictures with the same basic pose (i.e. fist propping up face), i would only put up one.

 

[bEnd1ck]

I like #1 most too. :thumbsup:

 

[DMajor]

Are there lenses in the spectacle frame? Or is my eyesight failing me?

 

[wdEvA]

#1 gets my vote too! =)

 

[daredevil123]

#1 works best, maybe more space on the left by stepping back a bit.

i will really agree with kel77, to me, if there are 5 pictures with the same basic pose (i.e. fist propping up face), i would only put up one.

Maybe she is trying to hide this huge zit on the lower left side of her jaw.

 

[XiaoYang]

Are there lenses in the spectacle frame? Or is my eyesight failing me?

Nope,this is the latest fashion @ China..

 

[Numnumball]

i love #1-3, nice work

 

[fuhyea]

pic 1. gets my vote...:thumbsup:

but sry to say the others are just average, and all are similar shoots...the advantage is the model have pretty face...

 

[daredevil123]

Nope,this is the latest fashion @ China..

That is so "fake"..... At least get a pair with glasses with no correction.

 

[wheresmycheese]

wow its nice

 

[h2fuelcells]

#1 - looks like details of the inner part of the black hood were lost - perhaps due to post processing?

It would be nice to try to rotate the picture a little bit in the clockwise direction to level the picket fences in the background.

In the same picture (#1), there is bright spot on the left-hand side of Zi Yi's hood. Dust spot on sensor perhaps?

 

[cordonbleu]

Have more variations in the poses. You have a good looking model to work with.

#1 works best, maybe more space on the left by stepping back a bit.

i will really agree with kel77, to me, if there are 5 pictures with the same basic pose (i.e. fist propping up face), i would only put up one.

pic 1. gets my vote...:thumbsup:

but sry to say the others are just average, and all are similar shoots...the advantage is the model have pretty face...

thanks for Your C&C, really apreciate it. actually there are some other photos, but because I dont think most of that good enough so I just put that 5 picts. need to learn more about directing the model.

 

[cordonbleu]

basically to showcase a pretty face?
i didn't feel the winter in the scene since it's too little of the background. can be spring too.
how about some snow?

thanks for your C&C. I just upload the headshoot picts because other picts aren't so good.
Beijing was snowing 1 or 2 days before I took this picts, and maybe because 5 of them are headshoot picts + f/2.8 so it became like that (you couldn't see the background). sorry for that.
this is the location photo:

 

[cordonbleu]

Are there lenses in the spectacle frame? Or is my eyesight failing me?

Maybe she is trying to hide this huge zit on the lower left side of her jaw.

Nope,this is the latest fashion @ China..

That is so "fake"..... At least get a pair with glasses with no correction.

thanks for your C&C. yep, thats only the frame

 

[cordonbleu]

I like #1 most too. :thumbsup:

#1 gets my vote too! =)

i love #1-3, nice work

wow its nice

thanks.. yep, #1 also my favourite (I'm using that #1 pict as my desktop background in my Mac)

 

[cordonbleu]

#1 - looks like details of the inner part of the black hood were lost - perhaps due to post processing?

It would be nice to try to rotate the picture a little bit in the clockwise direction to level the picket fences in the background.

In the same picture (#1), there is bright spot on the left-hand side of Zi Yi's hood. Dust spot on sensor perhaps?

thanks for your C&C. for the hood, it is because I change the levels from DPP..
I'll try it, thanks for your input. the bright spot is a snow, it wasn't snowing on that time but it was snowing 1-2 days before I took this picts