Yunji
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i love her wispy fringe and dreamy looks and her facial expression. #2's framing seems like there is abit of room for more improvement but i can't really tell what it is myself. perhaps a more angled shot would enhance the curves of her body better i think.
post more up from the series!
post more up from the series!
somehow i feel this set doesnt quite match up to your usual high standards.....the framing of the subject in all three shots just misses the mark. the shots do not have a central point of focus which is very unusual since most of your shots have a natural point of focus. the distracting background in pics #1 (railing, rope) and #3 (overexposed bedsheets) also do not help. my honest thoughts, and I know thats what you would expect when you post these pics here 
TheQuestion
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somehow i feel this set doesnt quite match up to your usual high standards.....the framing of the subject in all three shots just misses the mark. the shots do not have a central point of focus which is very unusual since most of your shots have a natural point of focus. the distracting background in pics #1 (railing, rope) and #3 (overexposed bedsheets) also do not help. my honest thoughts, and I know thats what you would expect when you post these pics here
i'm not speaking for her per say but me thinks that's because of editorial interference this time. but i could be wrong.
somehow i feel this set doesnt quite match up to your usual high standards.....the framing of the subject in all three shots just misses the mark. the shots do not have a central point of focus which is very unusual since most of your shots have a natural point of focus. the distracting background in pics #1 (railing, rope) and #3 (overexposed bedsheets) also do not help. my honest thoughts, and I know thats what you would expect when you post these pics here
Despite all the distractions and short-comings, I feel the model mega attractiveness overcomes it all.
More sleepless nights please.
lynniepang
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Wow. :thumbsup:
:bsmilie::bsmilie::bsmilie::bsmilie:
i just admire guys who are outright frank like you.:thumbsup:
night86mare
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will you marry them? :sweat::sweat:
Sorry i'm not the marrying kind
chisquared
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I like the first one, like she just woke up and she's longing for her boyfriend. Plus, her pose looks very natural and relax.
However, the third one makes me feel a little uncomfortable. Her facial expression looks scared, violated. (Maybe you wanted to portray a girl who is into sado-masochism? I don't know haha) Just my 0.02
However, the third one makes me feel a little uncomfortable. Her facial expression looks scared, violated. (Maybe you wanted to portray a girl who is into sado-masochism? I don't know haha) Just my 0.02
TheQuestion
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looking at the shots and knowing what we know about Playeur I'd say Jingna's done an excellent job in keeping with the voyeuristic motif that playeur prides itself on. Well done with working with the constraints you def were saddled with for this editorial. If these were the rejected ones i'd be interested to see what were the editor's choices that made it into the spread, though i wouldn't buy the magazine. I'd just browse at the local borders lol
flipfreak
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PLAYEUR!!! :bsmilie::bsmilie::bsmilie::bsmilie:
TheQuestion
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:bsmilie: I like mentioned it 3-4 times in my post :bsmilie:
Yes, i agree that could be a possibilit. don't we all know....its the big $$$ that makes the decisions
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