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[flipfreak]

First picture. Comments and pointers.

 

[silver.wolf]

not appetizing enuff. some said less is more. :devil:

 

[garou12]

First picture. Comments and pointers.

the dead have risen and walk amongst us! :bigeyes: but seriously i have no idea what you're trying to do with the shot.

 

[flipfreak]

this is just the antipasti although i am worried the main course from me might disappoint.

btw, love your pics and this is my attempt to suck up in case u didn't notice.

 

[flipfreak]

the dead have risen and walk amongst us! :bigeyes: but seriously i have no idea what you're trying to do with the shot.

the dawn of the dead.

 

[garou12]

the dawn of the dead.

seriously?:dunno:

 

[jnet6]

This is a :nono: pic.
Chop off the head at neck(joint)...

 

[Klose]

Not going to doublepost. You saw my C&C yet?

 

[m3lv1nh0]

Bro.. u r damn good.. every day got model to shoot.. next time jio leh..

If you dun mind my newbie comments.. this one.. compared to your previous attempt is much better in terms of exposure and sharpness. But the composition makes it look like a headless corpse.

I can see u r improving.. can't wait to see more!

 

[flipfreak]

Not going to doublepost. You saw my C&C yet?

sorry dude. just got home. thanks for the comments. will reply to u there.

 

[joe]

First picture. Comments and pointers.

Bro,
what happen to the pictures.I cannot figure out what are you trying to take:think:

 

[flipfreak]

This is a :nono: pic.
Chop off the head at neck(joint)...

oic. so shld i chop it off higher or lower? :dunno:

 

[flipfreak]

Bro.. u r damn good.. every day got model to shoot.. next time jio leh..

If you dun mind my newbie comments.. this one.. compared to your previous attempt is much better in terms of exposure and sharpness. But the composition makes it look like a headless corpse.

I can see u r improving.. can't wait to see more!

work harder to ask around la. i asking everyone i know that looks interesting. i get more rejections than u know.

next pic is anyhow crop also. :sweat:

 

[tato]

the dead have risen and walk amongst us! :bigeyes: but seriously i have no idea what you're trying to do with the shot.

emphasize the baby fats???

 

[flipfreak]

Primo

 

[garou12]

Primo

better but u might wanna touh up the skin on her legs a tiny bit. Full blown pores aren't very flattering...look like goose bumps actually.

 

[flipfreak]

better but u might wanna touh up the skin on her legs a tiny bit. Full blown pores aren't very flattering...look like goose bumps actually.

i not good at touching up skin. always end up turning models into barbie doll. :sweat:

 

[thomasq]

FlipFreak, no idea what you are trying to do. You need to have the head in you 1st pic for pple to comment the overall pic.
Let me have the idea of CSI pic in a murder scene without a head, hehe...;p

 

[silver.wolf]

more more ... lol :lovegrin:

 

[garou12]

i not good at touching up skin. always end up turning models into barbie doll. :sweat:

do color range select to make sure you have her skin selected then do 2 layers; blur for smoothing, high pass (soft light) for contrast (pores)...turn up/down opacity till it looks alright to you.