Hi Thanks for taking the effort...I will try and answer the simpler ones first...kinda in a rush...sorry. But oh...thanks for taking the time to comment too. Cheers!
#1, 4 & 12 - somehow the groom's more casual dressing don't quite match the bride's gown. I think it'll look better with the groom in tux but then again it's really a question of taste. Somehow this works with #15 by the pool side. Anyway I like #1.
= You are right abt the grooms clothes but we didnt really put much emphasis on that. I think its fine but could be and should be smarter and sharper with a suit or tux..
#2 & 7 - watch out for the things above the bride's head.
I think this is nit picking...sheesh...its not obvious is it? I always watch out for "growing items from the head altho sometimes a pic or two might escape my attention when I shoot, It will never escape in post production...
#8 - a bit confusing on the subject; house or bride?
Bride
#9 - may work better with a slightly shorter tree (my opinion).
May...but this is more dramatic... Thought abt it...I went for a taller tree. I have a cropped version. Not as nice in my opinion..
#11 - Groom in tux would be better but watch out for the spokes thru the head and neck and shot not too level.
Again you are nit picking...the spokes acts as a uniform backdrop... if its a pc or two poking thru i will be worried and it wont pass in post production... anyway...how would you suggest shooting this shot? Or would you abandon it altogether?
#13 - Don't work for me with groom in shadow. Don't know the meaning for shot.
Bride is more impt (for this shot)
#16 - Bride walking away? Where's groom? What does the shot mean?