Toa Payoh Flyover

[ryanrally]

Hi Guys

Force myself to go out with the 35mm lens only to build further relationship with it. Will get more for the day streets, candid, still, items...

Please C & C.... Havent edit any except the last cropped.

The purpose of the relative same shots is for you guys to C&C my composition, exposure etc anything wrong.... Still got alot to learn....

Pic 1 : F18, 13 sec, ISO 200, Shutter Priority

Pic 2 : F16, 13 sec, ISO 200, Shutter

Pic 3 : F11, 13 sec, ISO 200, Shutter .... Any logical meaning here? any impact?

Pic 4 : F13 13 sec, sama.....

Pic 5 : F7.1, ....

Great Thanks first

 

[parampita]

35mm prime? Cool lens. Hey, that f/16 shot is good.

 

[ryanrally]

Thanks bro

Its been long long time that I should start posting my pics for improvement.

 

[PyeeL]

Hahah hello ryan. You're the second person I see today who has been registered for a few years already but with an extremely low post count.
Time to show more!

 

[ryanrally]

Yah man... then can really know where I have moved to.... Thanks

 

[jonlou]

f16 shot's really nice...

 

[poondq]

cool shot nice 9.8/10

 

[ryanrally]

Thanks guys

looking forward to Marina Barrage one evening...

 

[Freewolf]

Your pictures seems to be lacking a meaning for it... Maybe you should try another angle?

 

[ryanrally]

Yah bro... When I go home and see this... whats the impact?... I need to learn more about the "Wow" factor....

 

[night86mare]

this looks like a great location with a lot of potential

but your perpsective seems to stay almost the same, i like the one in the first picture, would crop the right out a little, make it more squarish (but not entirely squarish).

also, i always prefer traffic trails with a tungsten inclined white balance, not what you are using here.

it would also be great if you went during an earlier timing, where you can still capture the traffic trails (perhaps you might need nd filter to help).. with the sky still having some color. that would surely make pictures like #1 and #2 where the sky is included more aesthetically pleasing.

there is an idea in #3 but i think a shift in perspective is needed

all in all, great effort :thumbsup: thanks for sharing the pictures

 

[mrwayne]

i think picture 2 is the best, just right, and the composition is better.

now the flyover looks like some freeway in united states. lol

 

[ryanrally]

Good day everyone and thanks alot.

You are right 86mare... The right dark side is meaningless.

#3 needs to crop away the bottom to emphasize the white lines...


Good day again and good luck in 4D and TOTO...