The day he left her.

[nikolaiski]

sorry, but the storyline and picture combination had every photojournalist in the room writhing on the floor in pain just now...no offence..haha..but you just have to go deeper into it. There's nothing THAT wrong with the pix per se (of course, technically some might start being picky and such) but the problem comes in when you try to tell a story with them.

Lets face it - good pictures do not need texts to justify them, and are often perceived to mean different things depending on the direction the photog wants to steer his/her viewers to. And when there IS text, you had better make damn sure that the photos you post surpasses the imaginative expectations of the viewer, and not have him think of something that "could be better done" if you get what i mean

 

[nlghtxx]

sorry, but the storyline and picture combination had every photojournalist in the room writhing on the floor in pain just now...no offence..haha..but you just have to go deeper into it. There's nothing THAT wrong with the pix per se (of course, technically some might start being picky and such) but the problem comes in when you try to tell a story with them.

Lets face it - good pictures do not need texts to justify them, and are often perceived to mean different things depending on the direction the photog wants to steer his/her viewers to. And when there IS text, you had better make damn sure that the photos you post surpasses the imaginative expectations of the viewer, and not have him think of something that "could be better done" if you get what i mean

ya. definitely much deeper to go. not a good start but will keep trying.

i am not trying to justify actually. what i feel is like any other stories, there are lines. even those who have done a great job.
for a start, i dont think i can achieve having people not think what could have been done better.

 

[shunzi]

the story dosent really go well with the theme.
PS. lets not get personal here.

we're not born to be gd photo takers..

 

[nikolaiski]

but i do believe that we were born to like photography..especially when I was never exposed to cameras and such until a year or two ago when i first started out..lol..just a thought and OT-ing a little.

but anyway, for the TS..remove the text because I really think your photos alone already are good, and keep working on that story line. I've always liked photojournalism and I'm learning that too