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how come this thread becoming a art philosophy discussion huh?:bigeyes:
how come this thread becoming a art philosophy discussion huh?:bigeyes:
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sorry, must be my longwindedness, but i think the discussion is partially related to the comments given here - i.e. explanations as to why.
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The first picture is too cluttered. I also found the pose too complicated.
The second picture is ... I never like tilted pics like this. However, since you really did it deliberately, I will give it as an artistic interpretation pass, as much as I hate it. Overall, lighting is flat.
The last is the worst of the lot. The shadow casted by her arm on her body is ungainly. The hair is a mess. The horizon is tilted, again, and this time, probably becasue of not paying attention. And all you see is her breast.
we should shoot pics we like,not pics other ppl will like
after all,we're shooting for ourselves right?
Along the way,we improve from C & C by posting pics here
Others may see what you did not notice while shooting
so,more pics for C & C prease!![]()
I kinda like the way Pro_FHM put his C & C
Comment or critisizing is 1 things, but giving our advice as how or what we would do
to get the person thinking as more views bring more ideas ,rather just saying this not good or that is flat
Btw my vote is for #1, perharps u can take it closer to the model
the name is right
Guys, its fine to share thoughts and opinions on style of shooting etc etc... But try to keep this thread clean with comments related to the pics posted. We can channel all other discussions to KPT else mods gg to move this thread to KPT again which is wat is not intended...
Therefore lemme share more pics on the shoot... C&C related to pics welcomed again to improve...
The sweet and cheeky Cherlyn (Hope I never remember the name wrongly...)
Cherlyn #1
Cherlyn #2
Cherlyn #3
Thanx for the confirmation...
Kyi, u have to simply love that hair of hers... :heart:
Kyi #1
Kyi #2
Kyi #3
bro, this cherlyn series is very well done.. i know how you shoot lo... i like Cherlyn #01 the most.. the blurish leaves is infront of her, very nice compo... nice colours... smile also natural... i believe the 1st few pictures in ur thread is just testing only.. lolx...
This Kyi series also stunning... :thumbsup::thumbsup: if only her bikini is tube type, it will goes well to her body figure.. other than that, i love her lips, its kissable lips.. i vote #2, the compo and contrast blends in very well, its very soothing when i see it.. u did simply too well..
Guys, its fine to share thoughts and opinions on style of shooting etc etc... But try to keep this thread clean with comments related to the pics posted. We can channel all other discussions to KPT else mods gg to move this thread to KPT again which is wat is not intended...
Therefore lemme share more pics on the shoot... C&C related to pics welcomed again to improve...
The sweet and cheeky Cherlyn (Hope I never remember the name wrongly...)
Cherlyn #3
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Thanx bro for the comments. Think in terms of composition for portraits and poses I do have a lot room for improvement.
Presenting Jia!
Jia #1
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And Valerie...
Valerie #1
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KT, looking at the photo above, I got the impression that some balancing is done to darken the background while maintaining or enhancing the exposure on the model. It does look like you are using layers, coz I do notice a slight halo around cherlyn's head. To soften this effect, you can blow it up to 300 or 400% when working around the threashold area, try using 3 layers instead of just 2. Use the background image to mediate the threshold by adjusting the levelling. That way, halo is less obvious.
The sweet and cheeky Cherlyn (Hope I never remember the name wrongly...)
Cherlyn #1
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Cherlyn #2
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Cherlyn #3
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Any pics of her with standing up poses ?
Didn't know Cherlyn was in the shoot - was she a replacement for another who couldn't make it?
Standing poses ar? I think other khakis will have... i need to go thru the pics when home... will post if any. And btw, she was roped in to replace another model i think. Definitely a cheeky and sunshine lady with a sweet smile :lovegrin: