A few things to pick about... but guess you already know.
1) Colours: The colours are off (from my office uncalibrated monitor that is), I think your white balance is wrong or you were using AWB. Can be seen obviously from your last shot.
2) Exposure: Overexposure is acceptable but from what I see is extensive over exposure for 2nd and 3rd shot. Gown details are lost, rather, totally lost very distracting to my eyes.
3) Cropping: Cropping's very tight for the first 3 shots. Esp the 2nd and 3rd. I don't like to chop/crop at joints. Makes it very unsightly and a bit turn off. It's like being 'disrespectful' in a manner.
4) Motion blur: there's sufficent motion blur in the first 3 shots, the 2nd shot is way blur but can manage to see the idea behind the shot. Same goes for the 3rd shot.
5) Framing + composition: I can seriously see where you're coming on from the shots, the only thing that spoils the shots are the above 4 points. :thumbsup:
1st shot, the warmth and feeling + mood is definitely there, only minus point is the motion blur & colours and also tight cropping.
2nd shot, motion blur, makes this picture which I find has good value to the couple; wasted. Overexposure & blur loses the details & significance of the bride's actions.
3rd shot, perhaps you can move behind the girl and capture a DOF of the bride as well, I like this shot out of the 3 most, can see the girl is a bit shocked and shy. The cropping of the bride at the neck is most unsightly and looks like a severed head. Personal gut feel is that the couple would most likely wring your neck if they saw this... hee :bsmilie: Crop a little bit lower the neck would be nice.
It might be ok for you to think to crop like this, but sometimes the older and more superstitous folks would believe otherwise, so to be on the safe side, best bet is you adhere to 'folklore' and 'tradition'
4th shot. Nice composition, but alas, the colours & details of the gown... lost.
You seem to be using cropping to get the attention on the subject in the frame you want, good on that, but your camera control still needs some working on. Keep shooting!!
These are just my personal comments, hope you're not offended. I'm just a nOoB.