Simon - 3pics a week

[simon80]

Today is my D70 first yr anniversary !! :heart:
It also means ...... No more installments :sweatsm:

However never post much pics in CS before.
So please help me to improve by giving constructive critics and comments.

Rgds
Simon

 

[simon80]

Title : Jenny
My first and only paid shoot

Do comments

 

[simon80]

Title : Porsche
Taken during DCA '05

Do comments

 

[simon80]

Title : Deity
Taken at the Indian temple along Chinatown

Thats all for this week
No comments ? My photos so bad ? :sweat:

 

[philliptan]

#1 - Background overexposed and most of model in shadow. Should use reflector.

#2 - I like it, though flash used should be diffused.

#3 - Too dark to see details.

Keep on posting.

 

[edfck]

i've to agree with philip

 

[simon80]

tks for the comments ...
look forward for more ~

 

[heroneo99]

was thinking will it be better if the position of the deity's face is shifted more to the left?

seems to me it is jus off centre abit.

jus my thoughts

 

[zaren]

Title : Deity
Taken at the Indian temple along Chinatown

Thats all for this week
No comments ? My photos so bad ? :sweat:

looks quite creepy....