seems to me like you have reached the IC ( image circle ) of your lens ( shift too much ).
The dark top right corner could be vignetting caused from your lens ( because you have shifted too much ).
good work
well done my friend,
Billy
The dark top right corner could be vignetting caused from your lens ( because you have shifted too much ).
good work

well done my friend,
Billy
no idea what caused the black things at the top... perhaps bad development.. 2 film in paterson tank with 700ml of smelly water... no rubber band, agitation as usual