The model, her pose, and the background items used are nice, but the lighting in the photos is not... the lighting is really too harsh already and the shadow doesnt really complement the picture well... in the first pic, the shadow is too obvious and make it stand out too "parallel" to the model and take the attention away from the model
Although the intention might be to lure attention to the model's face, but the lighting is too strong, making the face becoming a different part of the body.