Hi guys, first time posting in the Critique Corner. Hope to learn more from you guys.
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
I would like to sought comments on the composition as well as the post processing.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I would like to show the immaculate condition of the bike as a contrast to the "oldness" of the surrounding.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I was actually walking around to look for the train tracks near my house. Had to pass through an old area probably for the immigrants to stay and thought that the bike might pose as a nice subject. However, weather was hot and there were people around so quickly took the shots and walk off (did not really think about the other angles).
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think the composition is pretty simple and not outstanding, would like to know how to improve on the composition. I am also not sure if majority will find the post processing too overdone (HDR).
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
I would like to sought comments on the composition as well as the post processing.
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
I would like to show the immaculate condition of the bike as a contrast to the "oldness" of the surrounding.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I was actually walking around to look for the train tracks near my house. Had to pass through an old area probably for the immigrants to stay and thought that the bike might pose as a nice subject. However, weather was hot and there were people around so quickly took the shots and walk off (did not really think about the other angles).
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I think the composition is pretty simple and not outstanding, would like to know how to improve on the composition. I am also not sure if majority will find the post processing too overdone (HDR).
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