Decent shot with a nice control of flash to fill in the backlight. Compositionally, do take note of the excessive amount of headroom. So perhaps a little more of her elbows resting on the table would be good. Also do take note of the window frame cutting across the back of her head. Overall this is a good attepmt. Do keep practising and posting. Cheers.
Nice sepia tone on this girl's portrait. Will PS off the left beam and any other light remnants in the bg. Frame with a black frame. maybe write a few things on the left.
However, also agree with the others. Try cropping excess space on the right and the distracting pillar/curtain on the leftfor a tighter shot. A little off the top would not hurt as well.
Dear Bernard,
Nop i didnt use flash. Subject was side/backlighted, so i turned on the ceiling light. f2.8, 1/25, ISO100
thx all for the comments.
cheers