Photoshoot 121111

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1. Janet

2. Merilyn

 

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3. Bi Hui

4. Winnie

 

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5. Janet

6. Genevie

Please comment on how I can improve! Thanks lots!

 

[zane80]

Merilyn 1st photo made me dizzy, guess u know why. Genevie's 2nd photo, I would like the whole head to be there, and the sleeves cover the whole arms, not sure if she got arms or not if that is the first photo other saw.

 

[kei1309]

nothing more than just snap shots. work on your composition.

 

[rihocbb]

nothing more than just snap shots. work on your composition.

Hi, thanks. Mind giving an elaboration on that?

 

[Prince Photogenic]

Genevie's 2nd photo, I would like the whole head to be there, and the sleeves cover the whole arms, not sure if she got arms or not if that is the first photo other saw.

Genevie's 2nd photo, I would like the whole head to be there, and the sleeves cover the whole arms, not sure if she got arms or not if that is the first photo other saw.

The second part of your sentence, do you mean the sleeves should not have covered the arms if TS composed it this way?

5. Janet

6. Genevie

For the shot of Janet, i think you could try putting her slightly to your right (her left).

For shot #1 of Genevie, can frame her slightly to your left (her right).

For shot #2 of Genevie, would it work better if it was shot in portrait as opposed to landscape?

 

[kei1309]

personally i prefer cleaner backgrounds.

also take note not to chop of appendages. i.e. if you're shooting down to her ankles, leave the whole foot in.

take note of where your subject is in the frame. you can start off by reading up on composition and perspectives in photography.

 

[Zahne]

I like no.1 first photo and no,4 first photo

 

[Revolutionz]

Wat body and lenses u use care for sharing...

 

[rihocbb]

Thanks all for the comments! Will take note!

Using Sony A55 with 50mm F1.8 lens.