Originally posted by Jed
I like it, I think the idea is very nice. I'm sure I've been on that very same roof, or just probably they all look exactly the same!
I would have preferred a stronger development, such as the cigarettes. I don't know what, maybe a tastefully done shot of a loss of job or split with g/f or wife. Personally, I think your last frame kills it. I would rather leave it out, because it's really not in keeping with the rest of the series. Everything else is really artfully done and gritty, the last is sort of cheesy really. It's quite clear what your intentions are and frankly, I'd leave it to the viewer's imagination to draw the final frame.
Originally posted by kamwai
ya...suddenly last photo is a dead person lying on the ground....a bit disruptive
probably u can use chalk to draw a shape of a person lying down on the floor
and then pour some water (they look black also in B & W pic rite)
also put some "police" tape around the area (if u can found them)
then it really look like a scene where someone just jumped down
btw, how u do the 5th photo???
PS?? or your throw your camera down while u set the shutter to 2seconds
Originally posted by kamwai
btw, how u do the 5th photo???
PS?? or your throw your camera down while u set the shutter to 2seconds [/B]
Originally posted by eadwine
been trying to find this thread for a while....
how did u do the zooming down pic??