I doubt anyone would want to see out of shape men in wet t-shirts. Gals on the other hand... :think::bsmilie:
Just got an email reply from our friendly local agent that the TR power pack 3 will also arrive in Singapore soon!
Are you refering to the K-7 Ad on Monday 6 Jul, TODAY newspaper? It is on page World 12.
TODAY newspaper K-7 Ad
Does anyone else here think the ad is poorly executed? You've got this disembodied pair of hands grasping the camera and sprouting lightning. The camera, which is the star of the ad, can't be fully seen and only occupies a fraction of the total ad space.
Furthermore, can't emjay get ahold of a more professional url? pentax.com.sg or pentaxsg.com or pentaxsingapore.com, etc. Emjay, they are all still available. Perhaps you could work out with hoya/pentax on acquiring the local domain.
And lastly, the paragraph at the bottom is riddled with grammatical and sentence structure flaws. ("it's" should be "its", "...functions under the toughest environments" would be better either as "...functions in the toughest environments" or "...functions under the toughest conditions", and "Finally, digital photography now comes alive in your hands" would be more incisive as "Finally, digital photography comes alive in your hands".)
Look, I know I'm nitpicking. But really, I want Pentax to do well here. With great products like the k200, k20, k7, etc they really deserve to be in the top three. But slipshod ads like these tend to make the product feel downmarket.
It's as if the author of the ad doesn't really believe in the product enough to bother doing a good job.
Newspaper ads have a fleeting impact unless there is continual insertions to maintain top of mind recall... Pentax needs big bus advertising :thumbsup:
dunno why ur so concern with the AD... just a AD no big deal... i more concern with how good the camera is... nitpick on the camera la...
I've pointed the typo problem out before; I'm in the editorial line and so maybe I'm more sensitive to such language issues. But I do agree with you that detail to attention is important -- most of the time, products get only one chance to make an impression, and that's it.
I don't see it as nitpicking (though some may disagree), but rather, branding and conveying a certain image. A cover letter or CV with typos and awkward phrasing will put off employers, so what more an ad? But at least we know Emjay reads these threads. Whether they regard this as nitpicking and ignore it, or takes it seriously enough to hire a professional editor/proofreader is another matter altogether.
I guess what bothers me is that Pentax, in its various forms is a grand, nearly century old company (more established than even minolta or canon) with a string of illustrious inventions under its belt. (first 35mm SLR, invented TTL metering, earliest autofocus 35mm, only full line of weather resistent DSLRs, etc) Yet today, its public face is reduced to shoddy advertisements with hair growing out of its pentaprism (see the prism hump in ad... ). How the mighty have fallen. :cry:
First line of second paragraph was cut off?
ok... nitpick time yeah :bsmilie:
so the TODAY B9 column by who ah...Tan what... what is outdoor-sy ?? shy is it...
slotted a 14.6 Mega-Pixel CMOS sensor... what slotted ? so we can just slot in any sensor we want...:bsmilie: where is the hole ah... i want to slot in a 100 million mega-pixel sensor into my K20D no need to upgrade anymore yeah :bsmilie:
the editor never vet through...their england also so so nia... :bsmilie: