Nicely posed and lit (and great makeup work as well !), the only thing that sticks out for me is that the hair can be neater, in line with the feel of the rest of the image. However, it doesn't detract much from the images ... well done !
I agree with silverfrond, to me slightly open lips add a bit of intrigue to the image ... but to each his own, that's why art touches people in different ways.
And a lazy eye is usually visually undetectable, it means the eye cannot focus.