Frankly speaking, the layout sucks.
Pic chosen not apropriate for the layout.
No one put words on cheeks.
Not sure u want to show the pose, or the layout, or both.
Designing a layout is not just as simple as putting words on a page. There are many things to consider. i.e.: font type/size, target viewers, contrast/colour/depth, visual hierarchy, effect reading sequence, shapes/words to interest the viewers, & a lot more... & most importantly, selecting the right image.
But overall, not bad for a 1st attempt. Not many do get things right on the 1st try...
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