Newbie First tries with lines

[henrylim]

It's not as bad as you put it. While the lines do not converge, they do lead the eyes off to the right. However, the tunnel bend adds a lot of clutter to the picture, and there is also nothing to entice the viewer to wonder what could possibly be off the frame.

I think there's a few more compositions to be explored, hope you can make another trip down soon? Somewhere in Australia i guess?

haha... close.... which place in australia???

 

[foxtwo]

haha... close.... which place in australia???

that's too tough lah. hahha. Major city issit?

 

[nipapa]

thanks for ur guys comments.. i'll continue to improve.

 

[Hewland]

thanks for ur guys comments.. i'll continue to improve.

Hi Nipapa,

In spite of other's comments, I think you have a good eye. Great start, except for the picture of the storm drain.

Keep it up and develop a style of your own.

Hewland